She Writes

Hmm. Maybe you could add on to this? And try poem format? (See "Striving For Sometime" crit.) Love ya, Maya! xx Courtneyyy *teeth thing*

Hmm..I'm not sure I get the soilder reference...

I am actually thinking about reading it good? =D

I love these things. I have pages in my Writer's Notebook! =)

=) Oh my gosh, this is great! xD

I feel time to crit......=(. Great job, though. I liked it!

I LOVE it. Beautiful. And I sang it. :D

Awesome. I love this. Great job! *applause* And, see? You WON! *throws pink and blue confetti* Wooooo!

Aww! Thank you so much. I am posting a re-write. :) EDIT: Here's the link: K thanks!

I dont get it, I'm sorry to say. It confused me -- sorry! :") -xxx-

I get it!!! :D It is okay, I think it would be better as like flash-fiction or something. Sorry, no time..:\ -xxx-

hehe. :) thanks for this is a really old piece of mine. : ) and ginger, i dont know how i feel about it either. :\

Its cool, Steph. Sorry, I dont have too much to say..but its the weather ;)

Thanks, Ferris! xD

I'd thought I'd let you know that when I auditioned for a musical, I read this poem. I had added and changed a few things, and guess what? I got ...